ext_50541 ([identity profile] phrasemuffin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] phrasemuffin 2008-08-22 03:30 pm (UTC)

I guess you didn't see the original then.

a) it was meant to be written. 'Well written' is just a happy side effect of the author's input.

b) actually, it would be Peter's empathies. Actually, it would be Peter's _ies, where _ies are to empathies as empathies are to sympathies i.e. one step closer. Because it's technically, on some level, for himself. The original was for me, though.


If you're picking up on distance in what I'm writing, please ignore it. I sort of need to be distant from myself right now. There's no room left in my head for... stuff, and... well, frankly, I'd rather be in someone else's but that's not really an option, so I'm just trying to get out of my own.

Thanks for saying it's written well.

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